audience feedback comments.
Throughout the duration of this course i have recieved comments from both teachers and fellow media students, giving their opinion and views on my work, aswell as giving advice on how to improve and what needing altering and changing etc.
On Research and planning.
* Good bit of research – your video does not have to be this long as it is strictly a TEASER trailer – let’s see some of YOUR ideas.
* Pretty encouraging stuff but as Mr T says you need to start switching the focus to your own creative ideas.
Also, what’s the Mr Vengeance trailer for? Why no analysis?
On Draft construction.
* Good to see a more detailed plan emerging. However, would like to see much more information on how you are going to turn this plan into action. When are you shooting? How many shoots do you have planned? What’s your own timeline between now and Christmas? Also, you should be trying to add much more in the way of location shots, storyboards etc
On Teaser trailer.
* Level 3 – D/E
Very simple but just about works. Very minimal evidence of editing skills but unsteady camera just about works for this genre….Try to introduce greater variety in terms of of camera shots and try to add a level of subtlety and complexity…
On Poster and Magazine front cover.
* I think youve worked really hard on this today babe. well done
Really like the photograph and enjoy the simple colours but agree with robbins that you could investigate adding another x
* colour for ‘SIN’ and the tag line? – does this need to remain white in keeping with your desire for b/w cover
* I do think it is quite good, but I think on your font, you should use some edits – like drop shadows etc.. to make it more effective. Eve. x
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